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 1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).

WWW-you start really well and show that you understand connotation.If we can work on exam technique in the higher mark questions then you will make real progress.

EBI-read the question and stay focus on it. e.g. Q5 is on camera shots and mise-en-scene so you may need to revise those areas.

-annotating the unseen text will help you write more

-keep an eye out on your written English


2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question: 

Q1: 1/1
Q2: 1/1
Q3: 2/12
Q4:1/2
Q5:0/6
Q6:1/8

3) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.

4) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.

5) Finally, write a new, detailed paragraph for Question 3 - the unseen text 12 mark question. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure you refer to the text and write in detail. 


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